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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2001-06-24 01:30 PM


Can a simple nature accuse
My holding as being obscured
That which falls to our hands
The silent failures we capture
Of rain that springs upon us
Whispering our fears to the for
Letting our anger fail its course
So we may touch heavens eyes.
What false pretense is this
That fails my second breath?
Willing me to make a mockery
Of the hate that I have made
Content to harvest the soul
That I found beneath my blood
That scours my hearts favored sin
So I can lay down and rest.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-24 01:59 PM


...letting our anger fail its course....

that, my dear poet, should happen more often...

Well done!

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