Open Poetry #14 |
The File |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The File My age has left a file with me A chapter of ghosts by the sea The lapping of wiles I did dream With none of the solid of the gleam I’ve walked a path among the weeds With only ghosts of wishes needs. The perfume of the flowers scent Forever filled my dreamers vent. Where in the mist of vapors plume Only phantoms did I bloom. The sweet of grace the warm of lace It bloomed within this gardens space. Where I have painted, wrote my soul So very few see through the goal. For most can only see facade. The leavings of a bards bone yard. And with this piece I leave a stone For those that pass and I have known. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where I have painted, wrote my soul So very few see through the goal. For most can only see facade. The leavings of a bards bone yard. And with this piece I leave a stone For those that pass and I have known. ============================ YOU have painted your soul many times... the walls of this place are painted in GOLD with your poems of grace, wisdom and vision. I have learned so much from your poetry and I am better for every word... Trust me Stinky... make no "bones about it" ... your poetry's heart and soul is etched in the sands of time... and your kind spirit is engraved on the heart of many here...and those close to you at home... and OBVIOUSLY this tender render touched me... love ya Sy... me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You always touch me when you comment. You are my Tinker Bell. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And you are wind beneath me wings |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'The perfume of the flowers scent Forever filled my dreamers vent.' 'The sweet of grace the warm of lace It bloomed within this gardens space.' Oh, my stars, sweet poet~ No stone left unturned ... You are WONDERFUL ! When a *hug* just won't suffice I send *kisses* - twice as nice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, you will ever be my Tinker Bell Love Ya Sy Marge, Between you, JM, Sunshine not to mention a few others, I have found a paradise. Hugs and kisses back. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and ya know what they serve in paraside dont ya ... TEA FOR TWO ... *L* ... *WINKIEWINKIE* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are just too much. I only wish. This is the treasure of my day. Love Ya Sy |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Profound and eloquent. What would a forest be without trees? For that matter, what would a tree be without leaves? I enjoyed this one very much. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would give a reply...but cannot top the Moth's.... so I will just.... smile. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Incredible write, Seymour. You have amazing talent. All writing comes |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Thank you. Sunshine, Love you too. Lone Wolf, THank you for the incredible. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, We crossed in my answers. Thank you, you are really something. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy , " File " to store for safe-keeping . An instrument with teeth , used to shape the rough object to the desired form . Well done , not the least bit abrasive . Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr, That's about as clever as you can get. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Seymour, dear... if what you write is from the bard's boneyard, I'll be happy with a fingernail scraping! *S* This is a beautiful poem... and you are a most appreciated poet! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, My Randy Dragon is blowing fire. *L* |
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