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compose me a dream - repost for Marge
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compose me a dream - repost for Marge |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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 write me to sleep compose me a dream sing me a sonnet of true love supreme lull me with prose till sleep overtakes me hold me till morning with sweet senryu wake me shower me gently with wet haiku kisses let passion embrace me fulfilling my wishes we'll pen a duet with the ink of our hearts and free-verse our way through the difficult parts when nightfall returns with its soft moonlight gleam just sing me a sonnet compose me a dream ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
And on this note...a peaceful goodnight. Thank you both! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful to see you Vicky! This captures such a beautifully tranquil and serene mood ... very much enjoyed the lovely flow and sentiments within!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, I love the serene, poetic beauty of this, into my library this goes! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhVicky~ I love it ! Love it ! Love it ! You know I do ! ADORE that graphic ! You sweetheart of a gal ... It warms my heart to see you back in here, playing with the muses !  Big Hugs ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
JLR- thanks so much for reading.. ...and for the peaceful goodnight.. Kit- thanks so much...it great to be back! glad you enjoyed this one.. Melissa- i'm honored to have a spot in your library.. thank you so much for the kind words. Marge- after reading your 'Poetic Pandering', i just had to repost this one..  i'm so glad you LOVE it.. you make me smile..  hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-25-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
and free-verse our way through the difficult parts ============================= love this line tricks.. this is a great one..i like it all over again...  hugs, g |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I remember this gem.. always loved the word play and the references to all the different types of poetry... clever and creative write..and way cool too Well done poetess Vicky I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is really sweet and clever. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now how cute was that? And she even came through with a bedtime poem tonight didn't she, not exactly a bedtime story but was very funny! This was awesome Vicky, great jobber! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"we'll pen a duet with the ink of our hearts and free-verse our way through the difficult parts" I especially loved these lines. I can see why you'd repost this poem...it's delightful! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- yep...i KNOW that's your favorite part! thanks for giving this one another read... glad you enjoy it so much!!  love and hugs and stuff.. janet marie- thanks so much, my friend... it means alot that you would come and read this one again.. thanks for 'clever and creative'.. you've made me smile today.. big hugs to you.. Trillium- thanks so much for reading... really glad you enjoyed. Sharon- hi there, my friend! yep...gotta love that marge, and her brand of bedtime humor... thanks so much for reading this one.. so glad you liked it.. hugs to you, friend.. ethome- that's one of my favorite parts too.. so happy you enjoyed this one... thanks for reading.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Ahhhhhhhhh, sing me to sleep with a tune or two Or just a remember sung in true 'blue' Take me to the cave where the good dreams dwell Cause I can't go to sleep with 'ink' left in the well~  Tee-Hee~ NOW pen another just like the other Full of inspire Girl, you're on fire~ Night-Night~ or- Day-Day~ (depending on where you are)  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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