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Caroline7
New Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 8
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-06-23 10:52 PM

There is a blazing light upon us
So bright I can hardly see
It clears a path to my future
I see you
Standing beside me

I've been accustom to the darkness
cold
with solitude
The light is so much warmer
Engulfing just us two

Your love is like the sunshine
Reflection through the trees
A glass-like river
With a never ending breeze

Illuminations surround me
A tear of disbelief
This overwhelming spotlight
Happiness which I seek
I find within the sparkle, of your eyes
Each time we meet

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-06-24 09:43 AM

Caroline~
What heartfelt phrasing.
Welcome to our family circle !
Hope to see more of you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-06-24 11:55 AM

'Illuminations surround me
A tear of disbelief
This overwhelming spotlight
Happiness which I seek
I find within the sparkle, of your eyes
Each time we meet'

Welcome to Passions! Beautiful poem you've written...I truly enjoyed this...

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2001-06-25 09:37 AM

caroline-

this is beautiful. soft smiles
your way.

ps. love your name!

take care.
amy

"but i see your true colors, shining through...i see your true colors and that's why i love you" ~phil collins~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-26 07:02 PM

I like this. . . it's kind of like Dickinson in a way. . . just floating. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

5 posted 2001-06-27 02:35 AM

...ah, the warmth of the sunshine of love...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-06-28 10:46 AM

welcome to passions

enjoy

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