Open Poetry #14 |
Jungle |
thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
The snake he sits upon his tree waiting patient, patiently. Below on paths, prey walks past, sometimes struck, strucken so their last; Spiders dangle a midst their tangle waiting on corrected angles, not with any piece of luck parachute bite & suck; Lions & Tigers stalk around, listening lightly with hungry sounds, ready to lunch , to bunch then bound; Talons readied within mid flight, outstretched waiting to grip in tight, anxious on food, on meals first bite. Teeth sunk in, sunk in right. Right through the flesh, the veins to the juice, to the taste that relaxes , relaxes them loose; Telling them they have their fill, filling them in they made their kill. Day comes & night has its scare, Whenever where ever always beware, When you see, see the snake there. handle yourself, handle with care; |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very dark, done well. Sandra |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
awwwww you took me right there Craig and in the night as well..fabulous |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Spooky and enjoyable...well done! |
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