Open Poetry #14 |
Little Lost Princess |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Little Lost Princess A little lost princess was wandering through Fields of white daisies and lavender blue Tearfully searching for something she knew Among yellow buttercups dotted with dew A sweet lullaby interrupted her search A dove cooed so softly to her from his perch A white mourning dove on a white branch of birch A tree with a dove near the small village church The two entered slowly the old church of white The princess knelt down in the dim chapel light Please ,God, take me back to my castle tonight For I am alone here and trembling with fright The dove flew beside her and beckoned her on He led her through forests, past speckled brown fawn Through verdant green valleys, they traveled til dawn A white dove who cooed and a princess who yawned High up on a hill stood a castle of stone Too tired was the princess to climb all alone The dove spread her wings and in moments had flown The little lost princess to the great castle home Soldiers stand guard round the princess to keep Silence and comfort to put her to sleep The king sits beside her, as dawn’s shadows creep And kisses the cheek of his little Bo-Peep He closes the book now, for this is the time To finish the fairy tale story of rhyme From an old nearby chapel the vesper bells chime And up to her castle the princess must climb The soldiers are tall wooden posts of your bed The castle’s a pillow of down for your head The king is your Daddy who’s lovingly read A tale of a princess for his sleepy head The mourning doves greet you each day with a trill And will coo you a melody perched on the sill So sleep well, my princess, high up on a hill May all that you wish for be granted at will (Keep dreaming the dreams in the ink of a quill) Elizabeth Santos |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Lady Elizabeth, I shall keep this tucked away safe in my magical library to bring forth for my granddaughter's enjoyment....this is so very lovely.... but then, you always are! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a beautiful story! I too am putting this one in my library! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know that you're always in my library. . . and is there any wonder why??? Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A lovely, lovely poem. Sy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ Absolute enchantment - fit for a princess~ And so I shall share it with one or two~ Thanks, sweet poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
What a wonderful fairy tale, I enjoyed it very much Thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is enchanting, Elizabeth! Perfection! I'd like to print this out for Nicole. May I? This is a real treasure, Elizabeth! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What Denise said ... enchanting. Thoroughly enjoyable read Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Elizabeth: This is truly a magical poem! I loved it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Beautiful. I don't know what else to say. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Elizabeth, even before I read the replies, I was thinking exactly as Sunshine said. This is the perfect story for my granddaughters. I can see this in a beautiful childrens book, with wonderful pictures to accompany. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a precious tale! I, too, am saving this in my library Take care, Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely tale you have woven here, Liz, as always. All writing comes |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, I love this one! *S* And I won't even pretend I'm tucking it away to share with a youngun' (though I will do that if I get the chance *S*)... I'm saving this to enjoy over and over again myself! *S* |
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