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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-06-22 07:02 PM


Teasing

I want a woman that
know what she wants
and of course that
would be me.

I need a woman that
gets what she wants
and kisses passionately.

I love a woman that
takes what she wants.
No teasing.
Just take me.

Jameslee@June22,2001



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1 posted 2001-06-22 07:04 PM


this is fantastic James, I hope you find her...or she finds you  
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2 posted 2001-06-22 10:10 PM


James ..... I want / I need / I love. Very good progression. Bob
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3 posted 2001-06-22 10:22 PM


James,
  
  I like this I wish you good luck in finding that woman.


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4 posted 2001-06-23 03:45 AM


Good Luck James... if you find her, ask if she has a sister?? For me?   LOL

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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5 posted 2001-06-23 03:56 AM


James,

I already have her and you ain't a gonna get her!     Good luck and hope you find her.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Fancy
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6 posted 2001-06-23 04:06 AM


...the best way to get what you want is to KNOW what you want...you do!!!

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

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7 posted 2001-06-23 05:37 AM


JamesMichael-
   ooh, ooh, pick me, pick me!!
   oh...sorry...got caught up in the moment...lol  
   i like this...good luck finding
   that woman of your dreams..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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8 posted 2001-06-23 04:37 PM


yes..someone who would follow you to China ha..nice one james...hope you find that special someone..

                    ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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9 posted 2001-06-23 04:39 PM


Verry witty!Enjoyed it!
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10 posted 2001-06-24 02:05 AM



You know I like this James.....fabulous writing!!!!

Nathan

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11 posted 2001-06-24 07:45 AM


You clearly know what you want James, and captured it perfectly ... much enjoyed.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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12 posted 2001-06-26 03:59 PM


The first verse wrote a guarantee that I'd love this one. *G* This is great, James... and I wish you luck in finding her! *S*
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