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Nathaniel Shain
Junior Member

since 2001-06-03

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-06-22 05:21 PM

She Raises Skirts

With pretty words she raises skirts
and flirts, a risk she’s taking.
Her name is, Jan, she has a man.
A fool of him is making.

Her body moves seductively.
It is meant to make men stare.
Their bodies used, then thrown away.
For their hearts, she doesn’t care.

~Nathaniel Shain~

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-06-22 05:26 PM

An adult nursery rhyme. That, sir, is a compliment. Well done!

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2001-06-22 05:46 PM

Cynical, observant, poignant... Tight form and well crafted. I hope this isn't regarding a bitter personal experience...?

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-06-22 05:54 PM

Well, you just have to look the other way than. (LOL)

I like the way it's written, good job here.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2001-06-22 05:57 PM

Nathaniel,

Welcome to Passions

I hope you like it here.. with that said.. I liked the poem.. it looks like you have first hand experience with dealing with women like this. I'm sorry for that.. but it made a very good poem.

TaraB

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-06-22 06:30 PM

Enjoyed reading this..James

elizabeth anne
Member

since 2001-03-29

Posts 83

6 posted 2001-06-22 06:50 PM

Well done! Shows that there is this kind of person in both the sexes!

Elizabeth Anne

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-06-23 08:08 PM

Ahh..

I can see the mischief, and I can also see something else in this I cannot explain. Love it.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2001-06-24 05:22 AM

Nathaniel, an interesting piece. Well written and gets an important point across. Well done.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Nathaniel Shain
Junior Member

since 2001-06-03

Posts 35

9 posted 2001-06-24 02:18 PM

Decaflame,
Thank you for the compliment and for taking the time to read.

Mark,
Very kind words, sir, and much appreciated.  Yes, the experience is real but I was not the recipient.

Titia,
Fortunately for me, I am wise enough to look the other way.  Thank you for coming by and for the nice comments.

rosepetals,
Thank you for the welcome and for reading my poem.  I believe I''m going to like it here.

JamesMichael,
Thanks.

Elizabeth,
Yes, it does.  Thanks.

Temptress,
Yes, "mischief" is a very good word.  Thanks.

Dee,
Thank you.  It's a shame that some women not only continue to set this trap, but that men still foolishly step into it.

Thanks,
Nathaniel

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