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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
We sat together, Only our outer Thighs touching Through layers Of clothing Put there to protect Our defenseless Senses… You didn’t know me And I imagined I knew you, as we Shared the ride From airport to Hotel The ride was short, Made shorter by What I imagined About us… Quiet looks… Gentle touches… The heat in Pealing off Layers of Pretense… When we pulled Into the circular drive Lit with yellow orange Light that flattered Nothing, I almost Spoke…. Almost… But you turned And walked quickly To the front desk Without a glance My way…. I waited till you Were through And tried to stand In the space that Still contained The scent of you… Hoping to take at Least that essence To bed with me. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
There are those moments in life, where you see hope in the form of a walking miracle, and images such as this exist. This is excellent. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
the anticipation, the hope, you have certainly brought the reader right there with you in all of its power to mesmerize Well done, again!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've captured this moment so very well... whether fleeting fancy or missed opportunity is left for wonder. *S* I like this a lot! *S* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa, Ron. You DO have a way with words, rascal. You better go take a COLD shower my friend  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
And tried to stand In the space that Still contained The scent of you… =================== You have described this so well....... Captured me within the scene you've presented........ I wonder now if I'd ever get through such a scene myself...... Thank you Ron..... ******************************* It's only me.......only me |
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