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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-06-19 06:55 PM




Thorns of iron wire
and hidden thorns of roses
they both will prick you


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-06-19 08:48 PM


Titia~
What a novel comparison !
That picture is awesome !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2001-06-19 08:50 PM


Definitely, if you're not careful!  Nice lesson, Titia.  Lovely picture.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-06-19 09:03 PM


Oh, I love the double entendre!  Well done!
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-06-20 02:05 AM


Thanks to you for reading and enjoying.
I enjoy writing haikus.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2001-06-20 02:52 AM


Indeed they will!

thanks for the warning  

Maree

vlraynes
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6 posted 2001-06-20 02:58 AM


oh so true..
thanks for sharing this...and
the beautiful picture as well.  

~vicky

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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-06-20 12:17 PM


You are getting so GOOD at this! Well done.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-06-20 12:31 PM


Titia,
Good one I enjoyed.

ethome
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9 posted 2001-06-20 12:34 PM


Yes it's true...nicely done!
walker
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10 posted 2001-06-21 03:21 PM


Good advice, well expressed!
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11 posted 2001-06-21 05:04 PM


nice juxtoposition of images and message..

enjoyed

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12 posted 2001-06-21 07:40 PM


how lovely.....you surely have a green thumb!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

Titia Geertman
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13 posted 2001-06-26 12:57 PM


Thanks to you all for reading.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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