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Seeding Dreams
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Seeding Dreams |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You seeded my dreams with that look in your eyes the one that said I want you. You fed that need with a touch of your hand fingertips to my lips I want you. You started a burn with your whispered demands that smoulders still I want you. You planted this seed Now lets let it grow tend it together I want you. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very nice written. keep on working ..this seed will grow and become a huge tree one day but with interst and hardworking |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
ok,this is really good in my opinion and I cant wait to read more  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice.... don't forget the sunshine and water... all seeds need that and the warmth to nurture them through tender times |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely, lovely, lovely...tend it together, yes |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great one... Regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I WANT YOU...to stop getting me going like that...Clever poem Paula...I WANT YOU to keep on writng! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paula, Nice write enjoyed the read. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oooh - I really enjoyed this~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Waseem Cheema...Yes its growing stronger every day...thank you Watersign6...LOL well theres lots more out there to be read...thanks Cpat Hair...the warmth is there...thanks VAS...yes two sets of hands are better than one when it comes to tending...thank you Sudhir...always an honour sir when you choose to read ethome...oh how cleverly naughty of you Eric lol...heheh Seymour...glad you liked it Melissa...thanks glad you did |
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