Shooting for the Stratosphere

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Open Poetry #14

Shooting for the Stratosphere

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since 2001-06-20

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0 posted 2001-06-21 11:23 PM

I look into the telescope
And see my love for you
Shooting for the stratosphere
Barely, but still in view

I let my love be loosed upon
All nature and its guise
To feed upon the multitude
And gather in its size

And then my love was vast, untold
Accepted and unbound
Streaking through the stratosphere
In heart and all around

A tether, I can't keep it on
From source unto its end
And now my heart to heaven gone
No other soul will tend

So here it is, yet there it went
My love for you released
In my heart and heaven sent
For you it may have ceased

[This message has been edited by Front Page (edited 06-21-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-22 10:03 AM

Cosmic man.... ( grinning)

Enjoyed the read!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-22 10:21 AM

the rhythm and flow of this is superb

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-22 11:16 PM

reminded me of "drops of jupiter" by Train.... love that song... great band all in all.. i have 2 of their cds

anyway, great write and thanks for posting here... i'll be looking to read more of you

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-06-22 11:24 PM

yes....enjoyed....smiling....

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since 2001-06-20

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5 posted 2001-06-22 11:37 PM

Thank you Cpat grinning back

VAS you make me smile. you do.

Doreen, you are a music lover as I am!

Sunshine, thank you.

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