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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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He came to me in dreams last night a gallant man from long ago to bring me love, long out of sight and touch my heart with lips of gold. He stood before me tall and strong with open arms and sparkling eyes "I know that you have waited long, now I shall prove you need not cry." These many years I've often dreamt of holding love so solid real from heaven he must have been sent his touches let me dare to feel. Such warmth of spirit, burning bright enveloped me in love so rare held me quite fiercely through the night amazingly, such feel of care. Come dawn and he was lost again but yet I woke with pounding heart still knowing time is coming when the day cannot keep us apart. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*sighs* how I loved this and related to your words, I also share this dream. My library must have this  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
more of a premonition than a dream, it sounds like....may it come true!  |
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Sad Clown New Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 4TN |
Reality is born in a dream. Dream on. "As I stumble through this life, help me to create more laughter than tears." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sandra, gentle smile. Are dreams reality, or is reality dreams? Very nice write [This message has been edited by Logan (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Wonderful!!! I could almost picture myself in all the beauty of that vision. As long as that dream lives in your heart, all the love that blossoms in you will one day turn it into reality. ALWAYS "Keep The Dream Alive"... Love, Elise |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done..and perhaps the vision or dream will indeed come to be... Enjoyed! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, lil sis, this is a wonderful dream shared by those searching for fulfillment...I loved the aftertouch left by the stranger.........but is he really a stranger, or a lover you have just not met yet?  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I had this dream, then I woke up  "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sandra,...the structure, wording and feeling in this piece, oh my. How lovely a little stroll through your dreams, may they come again. I loved this. *Peace poet gurl. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thank you all for reading. I swear this is a premonition, and will come true!  Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice dreaming and writing...James |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Nice job... hope your dream becomes more than that ;D |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sandra, don't ever let go this dream: we still exist out there... just believe that you will find one of us. Nice flow and sentiments. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sandra, you never know. . . never give up hope, but then again, you already know that. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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