Open Poetry #14 |
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Snow White Revisited |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
Once princes lived in fairy tales to seek the maiden in her sleep traverse the lands, o'er hill and dale and bring her love to always keep. A kiss in time was all it took to stir the life force held within fluttering eyes and startled look she knew not where her heart had been. Arise, said he, to maiden fair no longer slumber thee alone my kiss of magic fills the air now I am here to bring you home. She gave a cry of pure delight and rode away with him that night. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
always nice to take another look. . . wonderful. . . ![]() ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
my kiss of magic fills the air now I am here to bring you home. Sandra, gentle smile, isn't all of it always magic? Princes, mermaids, seas, enchanted times, ahh, yes..even the twin towers of Barsoom |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, You have captured the ulimate fairytale so elequently...I must go read it again.. Love, Elise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! Where is a Prince when you need one? ![]() |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh......this is absolutely wonderful!!!! I do so love your writings, but this one carries magic on it's wings! Thank you, lil sis! ![]() The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I'm a sucker for good form and symetry (and rhyme and imagery), not to mention matters of the heart. Well done. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
prince kissed maiden fair it caught her quite unaware now true love they share |
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