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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2001-06-21 07:30 PM

Love

It isn’t just a matter of reality,
if only it were that simple,
it is boundless and without fact,
a sense of radiant energy
that wraps itself around the heart
while it coexists in the mind,
making the casting away of it
damned near impossible.

© 2001 Corinne Bailey

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-21 07:31 PM

You got that right! Well done.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-06-21 07:33 PM

oh yes, it's that chemistry that gets you every time. Well done, Corinne.

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-06-21 09:04 PM

No, Cor, hon, you don't cast it aside, for love is what keeps us, just heal the small rift in the heart, for it is only a small part of what you have..gentle smile

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-06-21 09:04 PM

Corinne~
A big Amen ! to that, girl friend !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-06-21 09:44 PM

one of the best descriptions I've seen for sure!!!!!!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-21 10:01 PM

It'll get you every time! Nice job!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-06-21 11:52 PM

I think that this is one of the best poems I've seen written about love in a long time.

Short and packed with something different. I love it, Cor!

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

8 posted 2001-06-22 12:09 PM

..this packs a punch!!!
Fancy

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2001-06-22 07:33 AM

So aptly put...

Regards to you Corinne,
Sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-06-22 08:40 AM

yep.. that about sums it up..

nicely written...

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

11 posted 2001-06-22 11:35 AM

Corinne......very enveloping. Bob

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

12 posted 2001-06-22 02:49 PM

Thank you all for your kind words.

Corinne

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