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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
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0 posted 2001-06-21 01:57 PM



The night, the rain, the car.
You and I together at last,
The kiss, the touch, your hands.
My first time.
Our love, our desire, our bodies.
Your expertise.
My lips, your lips, wanting,
mutually.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 06-21-2001).]

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
1 posted 2001-06-21 01:59 PM


Sounds like a picture we all love to be in   LOL  Very nice.

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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-21 02:04 PM


well now that brings back memories...

enjoyed..

Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-06-21 02:14 PM


Hope it was a chevy

Young love, sweet love
they say for every boy and girl
there's just one love in this whole world

Fancy
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 189
TN/USA
4 posted 2001-06-21 02:50 PM


...I could add nothing to this....
except...
the thundering of the heart.....
Nice
Fancy

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