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When I look at thee . . . tanka
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When I look at thee . . . tanka |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When I look at thee I do see thee with my heart Thou art my true love Thee alone do my eyes see Thine heart and mine forever Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A most fortunate woman, your love.... well done! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I agree very fortunate.. as usual it is well done and the switch in language from other pieces you have posted adds dimension to your work... Enjoyed.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sweet.....sigh  very nice |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful tanka..if I could think better I would respond in kind... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ I'd like to think so Ron ~ Next time I do one in Texican SEA ~ *sigh* Always here for me Maureen ~ You save it for a really good, positive, love-filled piece we can ALL share [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, Interloper! You do try so many different forms, congratulations on your adventuring and your success in it. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
VAS ~ Thank you, Virginia. Let the adventure congtinue! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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