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Open Poetry #14

The Power of Weather

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 2001-06-21 01:20 PM

Rain, the clouds are moving in
like shame they make the sunlight dim
their color black, like that of sin
with shades of backlit gray as trim

Thunder rolls across the land
crashing like Gods' marching band
leading with his mighty hand
symphony on the highest stand

Lightning rips across the sky
silently awaiting thunders cry
if we could look, or dared to try
we'd see Gods glory before our eyes

The mighty winds that howl and blow
carry rain and sleet and dust and snow
amazing power it has to show
but how it works, we'll never know

Constant changes, stopping never
will still amaze now and forever
it brings us death and life together
this hand of God we know as weather.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-21 01:25 PM

This is very, very good! Thank you!

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2001-06-21 02:46 PM

I really like this
I do, love the weather
Thanks
Connie

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-06-21 03:57 PM

you should post more Thunder o yuh I liked it yuh

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

4 posted 2001-06-21 07:00 PM

Thank you all so very much for your kind replies... 'been gone for a while, hopefully be able to come back around more, time permitting

Thanks again.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-23 11:12 PM

Oh, I love this one!!!! Perfect analogy, ThUnDeRkYsS. You've done a great job!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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