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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-06-21 12:24 PM



I remember
your voice
sweetly whispering
friendship,
tho
our hearts still
managed to make
the connection
for one breathless
moment when the possibility
of "more" shivered
invitingly upon
a warm fragrant breeze
of tender emotion
your lips were
so close, but
the intensity
sent us scrambling
to our respective
corners,
ever vigilant over
sensitive thermostats...


~Tier
6/1



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-21 12:29 PM


RT you can indeed write the romantic... I truly can't tell you how much I enjoy your work and the words and wisdom you share with us....


Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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2 posted 2001-06-21 12:40 PM


*smiles*

Thank you, Captain, I feel the same about your work as well! Always a fan,

~Tier

lunatic
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since 2001-04-20
Posts 172

3 posted 2001-06-21 12:41 PM


And you did that without a referee?
Lovely write!

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-06-21 01:06 PM


Yep! Imagine that! *chuckles*

Thank you, Lunatic!

~Tier

Decaflame
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5 posted 2001-06-21 01:17 PM


Tier, IWIHWT....it is truly remarkable....
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-06-21 01:35 PM


Beautiful write.  Write on!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-06-21 06:16 PM


Lovely...James
Sven
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8 posted 2001-06-21 09:01 PM


it's a great feeling Tier, and you show it here so well. . .



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Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2001-06-22 07:56 AM


wonderfully done...

Regards,
sudhir

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