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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-06-21 07:50 AM


In graceful ascension from the staircase
An enticing softness lazily trails behind her
In a blend of cream silk and scents of warmed vanilla

In possession of a genteel innocence
Her sensuality is more then he can bear

Clutching her in willful desire
He hungrily searches the warmth of her mouth
Hoping to find hidden fantasies

In heightened arousal a soft moan escapes her heart
Beckoning his fervor to rise in hopes
Of grasping her sighs.

06-20-01


May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-21 09:44 AM


Yep...this likes me.  Probably because I like vanilla.

No...it just flat out likes me.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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2 posted 2001-06-21 09:56 AM


this is so very lovely

as I read I was the parent watching her daughter escape to her prom...almost unable to watch the date's excitement

them I felt the excitement of the date and the girl, the vanilla of her, I felt happy for her and the adventures, experiences ahead

of course, as the parent I couldn't stay there or she'd not been able to leave with him  

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-06-21 12:02 PM


I love this....Very very nice...
walker
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4 posted 2001-06-21 07:51 PM


Love vanilla and loved this one allot!
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