Open Poetry #14 |
Evening Drifts In |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Evening Drifts In Virginia Salter evening drifts in as we place miles between us and the morning side of the mountain moving toward the dark we witness the dimming light fade on the hills south of our eastward bent around each new bend we reach a new opportunity for one more final glimpse of our mountain as it slowly becomes a silhouette on the horizon blurring evidence of cracked, crevassed snow looking for a chance to leap away from its captor along with the fading threat of avalanche its majesty lessens ever slightly, but the memory of its grandeur renews the power of its image to hold us in its grip for one more moment, one more encounter with its awesome beauty finally we must concede our good-bye to escape our thoughts, our lips giving promise more to ourselves than anyone that we shall return to wrap ourselves within its mystery, its elegance again some day © June 25, 2000 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"finally we must concede our good-bye to escape our thoughts, our lips giving promise more to ourselves than anyone that we shall return to wrap ourselves within its mystery, its elegance again some day" WoW1 That really caps off a beautiful poem Virginia! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, again, Eric! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful! Could that be Mt. Hood? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It could, but we were leaving Mt. Rainier last summer, and saying good-bye to a lovely day, a beautiful mountain. Thanks for reading and your encouraging comment! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful, I love mountains too! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks James and Walker...for reading and commenting...and walker...you had to dig down quite aways to find this one...thanks. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
VAS--Wonderful write. Nicely done. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, PM, for reading and commenting, your words are an encouragement. |
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