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Blaec
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 130
The Sunshine State

0 posted 2001-06-20 11:01 PM



You say that you love her.

So why are you here with me?

What keeps you coming back?

Is it my insanity?

Whay is it thay turns you on?

Is it the wild side  of me?

How much can you take?

I've just got to see.

How long can you keep up?

Will you run away?

Are you strong enough to leave?

Or too weak not to stay?

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-20 11:51 PM


Are you strong enough to leave?

Or too weak not to stay?
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you read my mind in those two lines...
you ask all the questions that we must ask of ourselves when we are in a conflictive relationship...
the ying and yang...
well done...good to see your name here again  

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

Fancy
Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189
TN/USA
2 posted 2001-06-21 01:26 AM


...you have painted a picture of a heart full of questions with no answers...the unspoken between the words speaks of another...what a chance your heart takes in asking what it never wants to hear...pin a badge of honour over your heart and hold tight to your pride!!!
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