Open Poetry #14 |
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Waves to the West |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Waves to the West Darkness into light of the sunrise I stood there staring at the West Calling out loud toward sleep Sending a dream of rare beauty I wondered along this shore Why there is distance and sorrow While the waves came close to me Stopped, stared, then moved I remained still as the tears flowed A sudden thought came through An image of someone emerged There was beauty, and a smile It seemed to have come with the waves Right in front of my torn mind My tears stopped, she was near me. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ this is truly wonderful.....*sigh* I like this very much ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful but heartfelt write. love it my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
This has great depth! One feels enriched after reading it. thank you for this marvelous piece. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
That last line brought it all home for me, Daniel, this is wonderful! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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