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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-20 07:11 PM



thee receive it not
nor in abode abiding
it is in thine heart
~*~
thee stand rock solid
needing nothing in thy strength
I will give thee love
~*~
then thee are complete
blossoming in ev’ry way
a compleat woman

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-20 07:13 PM


Bravo!!!!  

Well said. . . a true testament. . . excellent. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2001-06-20 07:16 PM


very nice, Interloper.....very nice.

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

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3 posted 2001-06-20 07:30 PM


Very nice, indeed...
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4 posted 2001-06-20 07:57 PM


InterLoper~
And thee, sir ... compleat poet !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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with you
5 posted 2001-06-20 08:05 PM


I like these very much  
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6 posted 2001-06-20 08:05 PM


Sven ~ Yes, both books  

Colleen ~ Thank you  

Sunshine ~ Thank you indeed  

Marge ~ *blush*  You just know how to say all the right things

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Interloper
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7 posted 2001-06-20 08:06 PM


SEA ~ And these like you very much
Zinsser
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8 posted 2001-06-20 08:14 PM


Very Good

Thanks
Connie

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9 posted 2001-06-20 08:19 PM


Perfect...
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10 posted 2001-06-20 08:21 PM


ahhh... romance beautifully written!

enjoyed this!

~Tier

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11 posted 2001-06-20 08:25 PM


Beautiful Interloper ... breath-taking romance in all it's splendor.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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12 posted 2001-06-20 10:15 PM


Good write

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13 posted 2001-06-21 04:17 PM


Zinsser ~ Thanks for the read  

PM ~ *blush* Now you're turning my head  

Tier ~ Many heartfelt thanks  

Kit ~ Now you've taken my breath away.  Thanx!

Bernie ~ Thank you, kindly  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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