Open Poetry #14 |
Yet To Share |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Yet To Share Please don't let this be good-bye We have so much yet to share All the stary nights to watch And funny old peoples clothes to wear Far off sandy shores calling our name With huts in the tropics for our body games Coffee houses of all different types To sit and ponder what others write But most of all I would love to share With out worry or a care Our minds, souls and our hearts What a shame it would be if we were to part Connie McDonald Nov. 2000 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Please don't let this be good-bye We have so much yet to share All the stary nights to watch And funny old peoples clothes to wear This is such a tender plea... enjoyed the words... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sounds like you share much together... I'm sure more awaits you. Lovely sentiment. Michael |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Michael & Cpat Thank You both so much I never know what to say.... dshjdhklHIUR;KF lol Connie |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"But most of all I would love to share With out worry or a care Our minds, souls and our hearts What a shame it would be if we were to part" Lovely sentiments Connie ... the tenderness and love flow sweetly in this piece, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Ah growing old together, A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Old peoples clothes, coffee houses, poetry, huts and body games...great images blended to yearning perfection. Thoroughly enjoyed and so related! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Kit, bslivker, JLR I really do appreciate your comments and the time you take to write them... Thank You Connie |
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