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Open Poetry #14

The Fine Art of Rejection

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-06-20 06:01 PM

The Fine Art of Rejection

I get so tired of
dealing with rejection.
Would much rather be the recipient
of your love and affection.
Hope I'm not too far away
from that rainbow connection.
Sometimes it's really
hard to be me.
Especially when I find someone
I like and she doesn't like me.
I'm not looking for beauty
and I don't require perfection.
Just a simple woman that doesn't have an
affection for the fine art of rejection.

Jameslee@June20,2001

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-20 06:03 PM

ah...the underlying humor created by the word play is a great counter point to the sadness...

nice work..

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-06-20 06:26 PM

JamesMichael~
Very nicely written.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

3 posted 2001-06-20 06:30 PM

If you ever find a "simple woman" you should notify the scientific community

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-20 07:16 PM

I liked this one James. . .it's kind of bittersweet and funny at the same time. . .

you play those emotions well here. . .

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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-06-20 08:08 PM

Sad and witty, and good luck finding that specimen

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2001-06-20 08:24 PM

Well done, James, enjoyed this! I'm sure she's out there, waiting just like you! *smiles*

~Tier

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-06-20 08:26 PM

Well said! We all desire this! Some say that rejection of the heart is the rejection of the soul...and this was penned so cleverly with a witty rhyme and message~

Take care,
Melissa~

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