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whisper to the wind. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*Revised from Open #6 Listen. . . can you hear it? Floating through the air like a leaf? A song so wonderful, sweeter than a dove's A song so quiet, that it can only be heard with a heart of love. Can you hear it? Listen. . . can you see it? Filling the sky like the arc of a rainbow? A song so colorful, so much love does it hold A song so rare, rarer still than the pot of brilliant gold. Can you see it? Listen. . . can you feel it? Tracing your cheek like a strand of silk? A song so touching, so light and so fine A song so exquisite, for you and you alone singing that I'll love you for all time. Can you feel it? So should there ever come a day That you need my love and I am away Go and whisper to the wind soft and low I will hear your voice and whisper back, "I know my love. . . I know. . ." ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow this is great. Glad you revisted this for us..  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Oh, it's even more beautiful now!~Take a bow, you king of romance, you!  Take care, Melissa~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sven...soft and romantic...helen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How can we not... remember? thank you... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job!...i liked this a lot...very nice feelings...until next time...sven im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And the wind will return, and she will feel the peace of the love...nice revision, excellent words..gentle smile |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I can hear it..Lovely thoughts floating on the wind. Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Such softly wonderful words of love.. a great read and a great sentiment |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is great Sven! A soft but wonderful read! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SUPERB! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Wonderful, Sven! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tenderly whispered That's my kind of poem Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I love that kind of whispering! Corinne |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I will hear your voice and whisper back, "I know my love. . . I know. . ." ================= well, I know.......and you know that this is just wonderful..... Flowing softly like a breeze...... ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all so much. . . I'm working on taking a look at some of my older work from Passions and trying to make it better. . . your comments are welcomed and appreciated!!! -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very lovely, this poem made my day  |
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