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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-06-20 05:27 PM

Sailing

he starts at the mouth
             then quietly heads south
    he takes in the realm of sight
blinded as he is by light
        but his journey,
                     just begun
heads for the land
                       of midnight sun
as he rounds the gulf of her
        and takes up in her salt of soul
                    he has found his center
and for once,
is whole

   the day of meet
was swift
      and short,
but sure is his desire
                 he will travel once again
to the land of emerald fire

PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

1 posted 2001-06-20 05:42 PM

hi!

how do you make a smileyface
where his jaw drops?

oooh, pretty!...tom

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-20 06:00 PM

Yeah..a jaw dropped smiley face..with his eyes bugging out...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-20 06:10 PM

Yeah, not to mention the tongue lolling out the side...

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

4 posted 2001-06-20 06:23 PM

Did I accidently stumble into the Twilight Zone between the Adult Forum and the Open Forum?
What a delicious write ... and perfect balance.

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-06-20 06:26 PM

LOL @ these sailors replies

FORGET the icons...
I wanna know where one finds such SUBLIME inspire....
my my my...IWIHWT!!!!!!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-20 07:12 PM

Twilight Zone eh?? Well, maybe not the Twilight Zone, but a zone nonetheless. . .

well done my friend. . . passionate and full of life. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2001-06-21 10:56 AM

Dear heart, need I say anything than this is utterly divine love. It's a happy sailor who's run aground on these reefs.

Wonderful writing, of course IWIHWT, but I didn't because I haven't the skill. Fabulous writing, absolutely outstanding
Take care
love and warm stuff
Puck

I really do wish I'd written it

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-06-21 11:21 AM

enjoy

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2001-06-21 11:56 AM

I'm always impressed by how smooth, soft, and silky your words are... wait, I think I've said that before! well, bears repeating, I suppose! *wink* :-)

~Tier

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2001-06-21 12:10 PM

a

for you...

regards,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

11 posted 2001-06-21 12:23 PM

Soft, sensual, and beautifully written. Very nicely done, decaflame.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2001-06-21 01:41 PM

My jaw didn't drop but my admiration for your wonderful talent did soar. Nicely sensual.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

13 posted 2001-06-21 02:17 PM

MMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... imagination running wild

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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