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Open Poetry #14

Immortal Kiss....Senryu

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-06-20 01:35 PM

Thy art holds a world
residing by a nature
most mysterious

Vessel of riddles
sheer, of thine own works thou art
an infinite plunge

I shall take this fall
In this kiss made immortal
Forever I'm yours

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-20-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-20 01:37 PM

oh vessel of verse
write on that we may read thee
revel in thy words

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-06-20 01:44 PM

riddle on in write
in valued verse fulfill flight
writer's rightful rite

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-20 02:19 PM

fall into kiss bliss
time ticks eternity away
forever be mine

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-06-20 03:51 PM

immortal kissed
on oft licked lips of verse
in beauty of word

Lovely poems you write.... and a joy to read..

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2001-06-20 04:38 PM

It came silently
Like a soft whispering breeze
An immortal kiss

You got us going now.
WE must love the theme of this verse
It is quite lovely
Liz

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2001-06-20 04:48 PM

Yes I do love this senryu.

Titia

(it would be nice if there was a special forum for haikus and senryus, don't you think?)

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-06-20 09:45 PM

PoeMinister~

In attention rapt
Mere mortals gazing in awe
Catch you as you fall

What an inspire, dear poet.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-06-20 10:14 PM

Poeminister,
Some good stuff. Enjoyed

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