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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-06-20 08:15 AM

Killing Me Softly

It's alright if she doesn't have
a soft place in her heart for me.
What a terrible feeling within my heart
to no longer share the pleasure of her company.
I really truly miss her.
Without a doubt she is one
of the world's best kisser's.
And yet she was more than that you see.
She was an essential part of a dream
that still lives inside of me.
And although it's true I could share
my dream with someone new
it's also true that I wanted to live
my dream as I fell in love with you.
If you love someone without their permission
does that make it wrong?
How long until the repercussions diminish?
She's killing me softly with her song.

Jameslee@June20,2001

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

1 posted 2001-06-20 08:22 AM

...how hauntingly beautiful...time is the answer, but not often the best friend.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-06-20 12:00 PM

She was an essential part of a dream
that still lives inside of me.
And although it's true I could share
my dream with someone new
it's also true that I wanted to live
my dream as I fell in love with you.
If you love someone without their permission
does that make it wrong?
How long until the repercussions diminish?
She's killing me softly with her song.
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SBJ...this is so softly beautiful and sincere
and no...its not wrong to love someone,
we just have to learn how to love them and let go if we must...
and thats the hearts hardest lesson.
touching poem sweet poet sir.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-20 12:04 PM

              "She was an essential part of a dream
                that still lives inside of me.
                And although it's true I could share
                my dream with someone new
                it's also true that I wanted to live
                my dream as I fell in love with you."

You're sure not the only person that has felt this way...these are real, down to roots thoughts...I really enjoyed your expressions!

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-06-21 01:43 PM

Very good expression of true love.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

5 posted 2001-06-21 01:49 PM

Oh how we all know this feeling too well, Im sure... sigh... beautiful

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 06-21-2001).]

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