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Open Poetry #14

Play Me Something

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-20 03:06 AM

Play Me Something

play me something
sweet
and familiar
from when
I knew
the tune
and felt
the rhythm
I now miss
the music
without it
sounds
just spin
out of control
how I miss
that flow
please
play me something

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

1 posted 2001-06-20 06:58 AM

fingers glide delicately
across the strings of your heart
chords of love ripple
in beat with your heart
a chorus merges
within the whisper of promise
a song is born of love

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-20 08:46 AM

Ah the chords and notes of that symphony are both complex and simple..

Enjoyed...

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-06-20 11:19 AM

A melody...known, needed by all. You will find your song.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-06-20 11:21 AM

It's amazing how that rythum and flow reach the internal workings of the heart!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-06-20 12:15 PM

Nice flow. Makes me want to say "play it again, Sam" except that was never really said, was it?

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2001-06-20 12:45 PM

Love to hear the music myself.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-20-2001).]

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