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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-19 06:57 PM

Tender Heart

I listen to
your heart in
beat
it echoes
mine in
repeat
one heart
we do
share
when I reach
out you are
there
tender heart
pull me
near
in your
arms dreams
appear
inspiration you
supply
supporting my
wings gliding
high, I
fly
never could I
have asked for
such
all caused from
your loving
touch

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-06-19 07:27 PM

this just flows so well. . . really wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

2 posted 2001-06-19 07:44 PM

Sweet

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-19 09:31 PM

This eases down the page like a newborn stream, weaving it's magic along the way. Wonderful write, Helen.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-06-20 12:34 PM

The inspiration of a truly tender heart...like no other! I've never mentioned this but your rhyme scheme is perfectly done.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-06-20 08:36 AM

A great gentle flow....and such tenderness

I enjoyed a great deal...

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2001-06-20 10:21 AM

Love the flow of this piece..
Thanks
Connie

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-06-20 10:35 AM

some of the most wondrous blessings are the ones we cannot even imagine asking for...lovely poem, slick!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-06-20 11:07 AM

wonderful poem...

                                          "in your
                                        arms dreams
                                           appear
                                        inspiration you
                                           supply
                                        supporting my
                                        wings gliding
                                           high, I
                                            fly"

You're poetically sailing here!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

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