Open Poetry #14 |
With You ......... |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
With you I walk on water And reach up higher than the sun With you I am oblivious To anything or anyone With you I can spread my wings And glide with the birds way up high With you I am never ashamed If ever I feel the need to cry With you I ride on rainbows And wish upon a shining star With you I feel your closeness No matter where you are With you I gain more confidence And have nothing more to fear With you inside my dreams Your face becomes so very clear Memories of you are hidden treasures In my heart is where they lay Kept under lock and key They remain with me every day Suetang |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This must be love I guess so.... Beautiful Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
of course man is not God (the walk on water type stuff), but i think all men should give their true loves this type of feeling. this is very well written and expressed passion. thumbs up to you and yours. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This sounds delightful up and happy....enjoyed! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done..and it does indeed sound like love.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sure sounds like love...this is pretty, Sue. Michaeal Michael Auguste~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderful poem from your wonderful heart. Maree |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thanks to all of you for your lovely words and I'm so glad you enjoyed this, I certainly enjoyed writing it.........Sue Suetang |
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