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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-06-19 06:53 PM


With you I walk on water
And reach up higher than the sun
With you I am oblivious
To anything or anyone

With you I can spread my wings
And glide with the birds way up high
With you I am never ashamed
If ever I feel the need to cry

With you I ride on rainbows
And wish upon a shining star
With you I feel your closeness
No matter where you are

With you I gain more confidence
And have nothing more to fear
With you inside my dreams
Your face becomes so very clear

Memories of you are hidden treasures
In my heart is where they lay
Kept under lock and key
They remain with me every day

Suetang

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-06-19 07:30 PM


This must be love I guess so....

Beautiful

Titia


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cruz
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2 posted 2001-06-20 02:42 PM


of course man is not God (the walk on water type stuff), but i think all men should give their true loves this type of feeling.  this is very well written and expressed passion.  thumbs up to you and yours.
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3 posted 2001-06-20 02:43 PM


This sounds delightful up and happy....enjoyed!
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4 posted 2001-06-20 02:44 PM


very nicely done..and it does indeed sound like love..


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5 posted 2001-06-20 04:04 PM


Sure sounds like love...this is pretty, Sue.

Michaeal

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Dark Angel
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6 posted 2001-06-20 06:03 PM


A wonderful poem from your wonderful heart.

Maree  

Suetang
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7 posted 2001-06-20 06:11 PM


Thanks to all of you for your lovely words and I'm so glad you enjoyed this, I certainly enjoyed writing it.........Sue

Suetang

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