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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-14 09:05 PM



A Perfect Day To Be A Poet
~*Marge Tindal*~

It's a perfect day to be a poet
sharing such well-versed rhyme
Chassé with grace across the page
in cadence so sublime

Tiptoe mirth in Grande Jeté
Artiste extraordinaire
Pirouette across the stage
feathered-light in worded lair

Slightest turn of phrase
held in sweetest display
Plié gentle poet
It is a perfect day !


Encore ! Encore !


"Swan Lake Prelude" - Frankie Ho www.midiworld.com
Graphic~ Birmingham Royal Ballet



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-14 09:08 PM


Ahh, geez, Marge, with Swan Lake too?, such wonderful thoughts and words...gentle smile
Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-06-14 09:09 PM


A perfect day it is, perfect picture, perfect poem, perfect music.

Perfect to my eyes and ears, thanks.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100
]htt

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3 posted 2001-06-14 09:10 PM


Ahh, yes, I do believe every day is a perfect day to be a poet...but, really, this is quite a cute write, Marge...I truly enjoyed it!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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4 posted 2001-06-14 09:13 PM


yes it certainly is Marge..loved it..
tip toeing away.....

           ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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5 posted 2001-06-14 09:15 PM


Ah, I see gentle mysterious touches here....I see a sweet plie of line...and a grace, beyond belief....

I see poets...touching....

with artistry of grace....

I see...

welcome...

Honeybee
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6 posted 2001-06-14 09:54 PM



Oh Margie, I just love it  
This poet must have such a perfect poem in her library!

Take care,
Melissa~

JLR
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7 posted 2001-06-14 09:57 PM


Encore...indeed!  Beautiful.
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8 posted 2001-06-14 09:57 PM


Indeed it is...enjoyed this  
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-06-14 10:10 PM


Logan~
I think I like knowing you're out there listening and enjoying.
Thank you, my friend.

Titia~
I am glad to know you liked it.
It's ALWAYS a perfect day when poets share.

SnowPants~
Thank you.
I have to giggle, as I ispired myself with this one
when I wrote the title in a reply on one of my poems tonight.

Victoria~
Thank you so much.
See ya' !

Karilea~
I think the only mystery is that
the muses are constantly hiding back stage !
Thank and *Hugs* sweetie !

Melissa~
Awwwwww, gee thanks.
Well ... okay !

JLR~
Each poet that I enjoy commands an encore -
Thank you.

PoeMinister~
I just love sharing these little pleasures !
Thank you for enjoying them.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BloomingRose
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10 posted 2001-06-14 10:28 PM


Hi Marge!
Encore indeed! Beautiful words fitting for a beautiful picture.

Hugs,
BloomingRose

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11 posted 2001-06-15 12:49 PM


Oh fancy!  I absolutely loved this one as I used to do ballet, and here I am trying to be poetic, it spoke to me Margie girl, and it spoke softly.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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12 posted 2001-06-15 07:09 AM


BloomingRose~
Thank you for peeking in on this ballet of words, sweet lady.

Mysteria~
All of life is a ballet~
And we poets grace the stage with the joy of the dance.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2001-06-15 02:58 PM


I love this, so lifting, I could almost do a spin around the room.
Sandra

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14 posted 2001-06-15 03:15 PM


Dance on sweet lady dance on
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15 posted 2001-06-15 07:11 PM


CatalinaMoon~
Go girl ... do a twirl !

Paula~
Only if you join me in a poetic waltz !

*Poets~ You all are just the greatest inspiration !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2001-06-20 11:27 AM


Marge...my friend..  
   YES!!  'tis a WONDERFUL day
   to be a poet...today and everyday!  
  
   i'm loving this one!!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-20-2001).]

ethome
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17 posted 2001-06-20 11:29 AM


Marge you are definitely a class act and this proves it!
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18 posted 2001-06-20 12:12 PM


I love to dance and the chasse is also a waltz movement which, if done properly, is almost as graceful as ballet
Well done!

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2001-06-20 06:09 PM


Vicky~
I am glad I caught you in a smile, sweetie.
Thanks muchly.

ETHome~
Awwwwwww !
You make me blush with joy !
Thank you.

InterLoper~
Oh, my ...
You are talking my stuff .....
I'm also a roller-skating dancer ...
Thank you for enjoying this one.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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