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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

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Calif.

0 posted 2001-06-21 10:10 AM

Time Will Come

Kiss me deep
In Passion and thought
For time will come when
There is not
An earthly me for us to be

Tho I plan to stay awhile
When I'm not I want but smiles
For you'll know you kissed me deep
To hold me over while I sleep

By
Connie McDonald
June 20, 2001

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-06-21 10:12 AM

very nicely done

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2001-06-21 01:01 PM

Sea,
Thank You
Connie

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-21 04:28 PM

What nice thoughts, Connie. Well done.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-06-21 04:29 PM

nice thoughts indeed... enjoyed the chance to read them.

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2001-06-21 04:46 PM

Interloper and Cpat Hair
My Thanks to you both
Connie

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-06-21 04:52 PM

I especially love your ending...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2001-06-21 04:59 PM

nakdthoughts
Thanks
Connie

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

8 posted 2001-06-22 02:27 PM

Connie, I appreciate the eloquent simplicity of this piece -- it says much in a minimalistic style which "breathes" -- it feels like a "mental mint", if you will... Good work.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2001-06-22 05:22 PM

Mark
OMG... Thank You for your reply
I love the Mental Ment...
Thanks
Connie

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-06-22 06:24 PM

Zinsser-

   "For you'll know you kissed me deep
         To hold me over while I sleep"

   i love this thought!!

very nice write...

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

11 posted 2001-06-23 10:27 PM

vlraynes
Thank You so very much

Connie

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