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Open Poetry #14

no-one

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2001-06-06 09:32 AM

This is I
no-one
living
no-one
lives

Doomed
to be
no-one
fine
no-one

The
no-one
lives
inside
alone

A space
a time
an old
post
code

The end
this
is
lady
a kiss

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-06 10:20 AM

"The
no-one
lives
inside
alone"
I liked this part best...interesting write

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-06-06 01:33 PM

Walter--I like this. Nicely done.

Poeminister

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-06 01:37 PM

Like SEA, I liked that passage particularly.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-06 01:41 PM

Oooh, mournful...that last stanza provokes a

"But, wait!!!! Don't go!!!!"

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-06-22 07:27 AM

WOWZA!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-06-23 07:01 PM

o yuh!!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-06-23 09:59 PM

Mm, I have had this feeling often. Excellent piece.
Sandra

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-23 10:28 PM

I think most of us can relate to this piece at one time or another, Walter. Great write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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