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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-19 11:50 AM



Three small words like
"I want you"
can capture a heart forever.

Three small words like
"I need you"
can form an unbreakable bond.

Three small words like
"I love you"
can move the universe.

Three important words -
want, need, love.

Two very important words -
"You" and "I."

One most important word -
Us

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-06-19 11:54 AM


oh yes....I love this one  
Lady In White
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2 posted 2001-06-19 11:56 AM


If we are going to be subjected to your reposts...

then by all means....

repost away...

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2001-06-19 11:57 AM


nevermind if this was a repost...

this is fabulous...

regards,
sudhir

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Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-06-19 12:10 PM


Interloper-
I remember this one.
I think you say it perfectly here.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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5 posted 2001-06-19 01:55 PM


Very nice read.
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6 posted 2001-06-19 03:28 PM


post...repost...and post again...your words are food for the heart...helen
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7 posted 2001-06-19 04:06 PM


Quite nice, Interloper, if you posted before, I missed it...though the title seems familiar in the way you've placed on the page.

May you keep that lovely meaning between the I and You of your US!

I don't recall, did you read my "Stay Awake"? It's in Open #14 somewhere.

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8 posted 2001-06-19 04:10 PM


I'm a hopeless romantic because I adore this.  

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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9 posted 2001-06-19 09:43 PM


This is succinct!! I like it.  
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10 posted 2001-06-19 09:47 PM


interloper-
  ah yes...i like this very much!  
  simple and to the point...and a
  very important point at that..

  ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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