. . . Three small words . . . Repost (I think)

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Open Poetry #14

. . . Three small words . . . Repost (I think)

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-19 11:50 AM

Three small words like
"I want you"
can capture a heart forever.

Three small words like
"I need you"
can form an unbreakable bond.

Three small words like
"I love you"
can move the universe.

Three important words -
want, need, love.

Two very important words -
"You" and "I."

One most important word -
Us

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-06-19 11:54 AM

oh yes....I love this one

Lady In White

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USA

2 posted 2001-06-19 11:56 AM

If we are going to be subjected to your reposts...

then by all means....

repost away...

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2001-06-19 11:57 AM

nevermind if this was a repost...

this is fabulous...

regards,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-06-19 12:10 PM

Interloper-
I remember this one.
I think you say it perfectly here. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

5 posted 2001-06-19 01:55 PM

Very nice read.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-06-19 03:28 PM

post...repost...and post again...your words are food for the heart...helen

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-06-19 04:06 PM

Quite nice, Interloper, if you posted before, I missed it...though the title seems familiar in the way you've placed on the page.

May you keep that lovely meaning between the I and You of your US!

I don't recall, did you read my "Stay Awake"? It's in Open #14 somewhere.

Auguste

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By the sea

8 posted 2001-06-19 04:10 PM

I'm a hopeless romantic because I adore this.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2001-06-19 09:43 PM

This is succinct!! I like it.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-06-19 09:47 PM

interloper-
ah yes...i like this very much!

simple and to the point...and a
very important point at that..

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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