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Meter Man ( ia ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
A few have asked " How is it so to know just where the line breaks go so they don't interrupt the flow ? " As if I've got a clue that shows ! I write / these things / with slash / marks thus I found / them on / the sil / ly bus and soon / with ver / y lit / tle fuss where pen / cil leads / they now / follow They help / me to / stay or / ganized and now / I can't / write oth / erwise the " Me / ter Man " / goes nuts / you guys which just / in case / you did / not know Is why / I wrote / this goo / fy poem that tick / tocks like / a me / tronome a trick / that's slick / as pol / ished chrome that works / for me / quite well / and so... I thought that I'd pass it along though you may think it's just plain wrong to clutter your rough drafts like this yet was there one beat that was missed ? [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
beats me!!!! I'm enjoying your humor and all wrapped up in a lesson to boot! I never could do the slash thing tho...me? I tend to snap my fingers while I read...crazy man..scooby dooby!  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A Moose as Meter Man and a Deer as Balladeer. That explains it all and makes perfect sense!  Great job Doc. [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I liked it,/and all. *S ~A~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is great!! I do this: -/-/-/-/ Works for me.. |
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