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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Design The sky lies close against the sea And so resembles it The two together appear to be A craftsman's tool. Long, gray, level Save for a single cloud Centered like a bubble on the horizon. RMW |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yet what sky and water measure...... there isn't a better tool made  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice imagery... I have seen such sky and meeting |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes, I loved playing with my father's level.... thank you for this snippet of recall... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are plumb inspirational, Bob |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
great image...i can see this as i live on the gulf in fla...helen |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
you truly have eyes to see |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Your imagery is amazing.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
and they so in fact are what a delightful read, as usual, and yet a touch unusual to be titillating of the senses it so makes me want to sit on the shore and see what you have described somewhere more certainly than in my mind's eye...thanks for this vision, though, it is as vivid as a mind's eye can be p.s. do you have Papa's e-mail? I think he'd enjoy the one I posted yesterday called "One Heavy Chevy." [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-03-2001).] |
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