Open Poetry #14 |
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The Postulant at Dusk |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Postulant at Dusk If true confession, As with the sun, Burns all remaining left undone, Then dear persuasion, Oh sweet delight, How long these embers, This deep twilight? RMW |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...then dear persuasion... oh...OK....keep it up....we're smiling here! |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
So glad you dropped in today... I do so enjoy reading your words...and pondering the meanings... very nicely done RL... as usual I am in awe of your talent |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is beautiful, Robere, It's a real treat to get a rhyming poem from you! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Back to the top for this wonderful piece. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this just wraps one in warm |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
good question, imbued with a poet's thinking! great read! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Persuasion can indeed be a delight. Just like this work of yours. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wish I could write like this... Cor |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Hey all....just a note to thank you for your kind thoughts and interest. They are much appreciated....notwithstanding my belated thanks. Bob |
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