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Open Poetry #14

Nothing Going Nowhere!!!

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

0 posted 2001-06-19 05:13 AM

Nothing Going Nowhere
on a two way track
Nothing Going Nowhere
will it ever come back?
Nothing Going Nowhere
where would I be
if Nothing Going Nowhere
had never taken me?

BUT,

Nothing Going Nowhere
wasn't so bad...
'cause Nothing Going Nowhere
was all that I had.
Nothing Going Nowhere
had a great plan
but,
Nothing Going Nowhere
had lost its stand.

AND,

when I had gotten back
from where I wasn't going
I found that nothing learned there
was ever worth knowing.

BUT,

again I know
I will go there
just to say I've been
and maybe this time
I'll bring back
knowledge
of what could have been.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2001-06-19 07:49 AM

Once again we see why there are rules,
of the lot of the posts you deposited,
this, to me, is one of the better.

But I like repetitiveness,
And pound rhythm and rhyme.

Shows promise,
Just don’t overwhelm us all at once.

Gloom

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-19 08:28 AM

I think the best of what I have read of yours... enjoyed the rhyme.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-06-19 09:40 AM

I like the message of this!!!

well said!

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