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End of the Line For Poet deVine
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End of the Line For Poet deVine |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's the end of the line for Poet deVine the train has pulled into the station Her ticket expired she's not desired she's lost her motivation Her rhyme is depleted torn up, short sheeted and lacking in the power to amuse She's getting upset without regret she's definitely got a short fuse Her dander is rising it's not surprising the heat must boil her brain So without further ado I give now to you a most deVine explain! My man ran away with a woman from Calais and took my Sheltie named Fred They took the fridge and the cat named Midge and the blanket right off my bed! So if there's no reason in my rhyming this season and my verse is anything but funny It's because of that man we'll call him Stan is no longer my sweet little honey! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
so does that mean ole Walt can move in?????? Fun write o yuh |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Geez, Poet, a good dog is hard to find, I am sorry for your loss. Hey, there is your inspiration..the dog...gentle smile |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Chuckle, Chuckle. Joyce |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Walt, you have to sleep on the porch ok? And Logan, I sure miss the dog....(I think Stan had fleas!) |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Refrigerators can be replaced, Stan had a problem if he had to take a lap dog and I suspect you will find new inspiration. Thanks for the laugh. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
My favorite brand of humor.. Sounds like you are better off, although I am sure you will miss the sheltie and the fridge... (giggles) Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Geez...the dog? How low can you get?...he aint worth tear one...to leave a darlin like you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sheesh, take anything but the dog! I had a husband once who wrote his favorite "blankie" into our separation agreement...I gave it to him too, I unraveled it square by square, and put it in a big green garbage bag, hey, they didn't say how he was to get it after all, so he got it! Fun stuff Sharon. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Did he leave the pickup truck??? Losing a dog is bad enough.... but if he took the truck too...you may have a case for abuse... Enjoyed the read! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whatever you "lost" you have certainly found! Well done and an enjoyable read  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
LOL I bet you miss the dog! Hugs, Deb |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I have one puppy left in my litter if you want it ... its free..... : ) Very Good Connie |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Lacking in the power to amuse...Never! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
at least mine left my daughter, the house and the cats...written in humorous form but so close to the norm, I don't know whether to laugh or to cry...I'm just hoping that you aren't really leavin' the writin' scene, nor PIP, that'd be the pits and pip's. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Devine One, Looking back on pain sometimes makes for the funniest thoughts. Enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
End of the line for Poet deVine? NOPE. Back to the top so this poet won't stop!  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
PDV - you are too much, lady! This poem is great, cheered me right up, it did! Corinne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
OFF WITH HIS HEAD! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for you kind comments!! Though this is NOT true, I just was in the mood for something silly.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha, glad it is not true. Very cute. Though I may have been relating a bit too much. Sandra |
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Ain' Miss Behavin' Junior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 25 |
Dog doesn't rhyme with Stan... I guess you'll just have to keep on writing until you get it, write?...  |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Whew!! I awfully glad you have both the dog and your sense of humor. Truly a good dog is difficult to find. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ROFL. Too funny! All writing comes |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
HEH  K |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Silly??? *G* For the first few verses, I thought you were writing about me!!!! LOL. This is great, PDV... enjoyed it much! |
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