Open Poetry #14 |
Surrender |
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Release us From melancholic state And cease thus This diabolic wait. Come to me, In this time and place, Thou knew me, From my rhyme'd pace. Debut we And gaze upon the face, That renews thee An interest to embrace. The time's right, Wait not another day, Defy fright, Please hurry on your way To delight, In passion's heady sway, For life's light So finite, it may stray. Surrender, Surrender to me now, And render, The Love that you have vowed, So tender, Yet from this distance how, Will splendor, So sundered be allowed? |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully penned sir! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well done, and you do give "Willie" a run for his money once in a while, yes you do! Loved the style of this one. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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