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Open Poetry #14

Dreams She Said v2

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-06-18 10:05 PM

“Tell me your dreams of last night.”

There’s a blackness of under,
Underground, without sound,
Shallow earth will slow smother,
Soon comes hell, in earth smell;
Till the only noise that pounds
Is the final beats of heart,
Then there is that bell that sounds,
And the nightmare falls apart;
A cold sweat and all’s wet,
I’ve waken before the flames,
Before calling out the names.

There’s a blackness of under,
Undercover hiding well.

Gloom

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-06-19 12:46 PM

PG...not sure if my take on this is correct, but I've had enough nightmares to feel my fingers tremble and that misty sweat above my lips and on my forehead. Dreams seem to be a theme lately with you, so I wish you sweet ones!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-06-19 07:52 AM

Thank you, serenity,
For the kind words in response

Gloom

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-19 08:46 AM

enjoyed the sounds and the images...nice word play and capturing of sureal in a concrete form..

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