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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2001-06-18 09:52 PM



     

sleep with the angels, my friend
wrapped in their wings of love
rest your weary head and know
He cradles you from above

sleep with the angels, dear friend
with sleep comes a clearer view
give Him your cares
on a wing...with a prayer
having faith in life anew

sleep with the angels, sweet friend
dare to dream of a better day
in the morning, God's perfect sunrise
will show you a brighter way

wake with the angels, my friend...


~vlraynes



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes





[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-18-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-18 09:56 PM


I happen to collect angels, so I shall collect this, and put it in its proper place...

thank you!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-18-2001).]

Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2001-06-18 09:59 PM


Very beautiful, Vicky.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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3 posted 2001-06-18 10:12 PM


You are most welcome, Vic. You've created a very beautiful poem around a simple nighttime wish.


Here's wishing for snow in the desert! LOL

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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4 posted 2001-06-18 10:22 PM


vlraynes--Beautiful writing.  Enjoyed this very much.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-06-18 11:03 PM


Oh, Vicky~
You would just have to know I'd love this one !

I feel soooooooo glad that you are back !
Thank you for posting this beauty !
Love ya', lady !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2001-06-18 11:11 PM


sunshine-
  thanks so much...
  i love angels too.
  really glad you enjoyed this...

Lone Wolf-
  thanks for the kind words...
  glad you enjoyed it...

Alicat-
  thanks, friend...you had just the
  right words at just the right time...
  really happy you like this one..

  thanks for the wish!!  we could use
  some snow here about now...lol.

Poeminister-
  thanks so much for reading..
  glad you enjoyed!  

Marge-
  thanks so much, my friend...
  i so appreciate the warm welcome back..
  i've missed this place, and i've missed YOU!!
  i'm so happy you enjoyed this one...as
  usual you've put a huge smile on my face..

  love and hugs, my friend...

thanks again all,
  ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2001-06-19 07:05 PM



wowser!  that was cool!  i really like that, tricks.... you know this one hit me right there, dont ya....  

enjoyed muchly...
hugs, g

no i wont be afraid.
no i...wont be afraid,
just as long
as you stand,
stand by me...
-ben e king

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