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Open Poetry #14
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Jade
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since 2001-06-15
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Emerald City
0 posted 2001-06-18 09:33 PM

Quietly I sit
pondering the walls you've built
Trapping pain within

Cheek against the stone
The coldness chilling my heart
I can hear your tears


"Not to take possession of your life plan is to let your existance be an accident."
Irvin D. Yalom
© Copyright 2001 Jade - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-18 10:41 PM

Jade...hauntingly lovely....
Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2001-06-18 11:49 PM

Deep and chilling...well done.
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