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Casting (Inspired by RMW some time ago)
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Casting (Inspired by RMW some time ago) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Single hook tied tightly to bits of hair and strung on line to cast for unseen rewards As a single thought Is tied tightly to bits of memory strung on time, and cast for unseen friends. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the metaphor and the simple meditative structure of this evokes both the feeling of fishing and remembrance. VERY nice work! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Excellent. Bob will like that...I know I do. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know a gal intruding in on fishing time probably isn't really required... but I enjoyed the analogy a lot! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Uh.......I don't recall having yet received my royalties check. Hmmmmm? PS Love this. Bob |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Royalties??? I thought that was what we fought the revolutionary war for..to rid ourselves of them.. (grinning) |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Grinning? Grinning!!!! Who said you could grin around here. Don't you know that this is a respectable place???? Put that away!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Huh? Somebody whip out something ROYAL????   couldn't resist...so soddy...lol |
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