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RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2001-06-18 08:17 AM

Till that day the hazel light
Dims in this soul's leaded panes,
When the corpus retreats to night
Past the reach of all worldly pain,
When this heart and it's trusted might
Starves it's blood from the hungry vein,
Till the grim reaper's final smite
Leaves the physical person slain.

Till the hour my spirit takes flight
And what's left melds to changing terrain,
When I'm given my final rite
O'er the shell of my earthly remains,
I'll ascend through the tunnel of white
For I pray this is preordained,
Time spent here was always finite,
There's an end to vitalities reign.

Till that moment I'll cast the Lovelite,
Till that instant I'll strive to maintain,
In your heart a passion ignites,
In this life we a rapture attain,
Offered words would desire incite
And the ring of the truth they contain,
C'est L'amour d'ici that I write,
It's my song but it needs your refrain.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-18 08:18 AM

What a wonderful love song....this is very nice! Thank you!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-18 08:24 AM

very nice.. I enjoyed/

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

3 posted 2001-06-18 05:49 PM

....mmmmmmmm.....good

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-06-18 05:50 PM

Wonderful writing ...an enjoyable read throughout!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2001-06-18 07:59 PM

Ah...waiting can be difficult...enjoyed this very much sir.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-06-18 08:01 PM

Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful poem, many good images in it, a very enjoyable read.

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

Jade
New Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 9
Emerald City

7 posted 2001-06-18 09:23 PM

Lovely. I found this so very rich, I read it three times.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

8 posted 2001-06-18 10:43 PM

Thank you all very much. I'm almost embarrassed by the wealth of talent and acceptance I'm finding here.

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