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The Blush of a Touch
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The Blush of a Touch |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Golden petals of dawn unfolds into a blossom touching softly, the way the stars touch the night The blush of a touch warms with passion deep within blooming fragrant memories upon beaches of yesterday Footprints in ivory sands stalk each beat of the heart the waves of pleasure haunts upon shores of broken dreams Sweet bouquet of love lingers as golden petals enwrap teardrops of a lost love in the seclusion of dusk. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very, very lovely, Victoria, you keep exceeding yourself each time...gentle smile |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Victoria...this painted a lovely picture..and your gentle spirit outshines even that! Very sweet, soft and romantic!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Sweet bouquet of love lingers." You come up with some romantic lines...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ 'The blush of a touch warms with passion deep within blooming fragrant memories upon beaches of yesterday' Very pretty thoughts here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, with a touch of loss. At least that's my reading of it. Peace Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You write it so beautifully, Victoria. Very well done. All writing comes |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Victoria--Lovely writing. Enjoyed this very much. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you everyone...pleased you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is very quiet and delicate Victoria. . . I like it. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sven..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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