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Mabel A. Dilley
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0 posted 2001-06-17 09:26 PM







Years have spun their tale and I look back
through journals, notes if you will: each year
a different colored notebook, as if color
could be captured somehow in these too brief pages,
as I sit thumbing.

My search is for that telling of marvel
however full, however brief, when joy filled
my eyes, ears and mouth with those famous words:
“this is the best!” Certainly, this journey
has no known end, although I witness snapshots
that inspire memory, perhaps passion.

The sun warm on my face, the breeze tender,
and the sea wall a deep washed bronze: I remember
June flowers falling around my feet, a smile
plays upon my lips brushed with anticipation.
How can I breathe deeply enough to swallow all
of creation at this present moment?
How can I dare a dream?

I am laughing as children do for no apparent reason
but for the love of time spent today, for I cannot
fathom the depth of yesterday
or length of tomorrow.

Who knows the hour of my time or the wishes
of the Devine that binds me here?
So I shall declare with thanksgiving
today as the best day of my life.


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"I am not now that which I have been."

[This message has been edited by Julian Lester (edited 06-17-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Mabel A. Dilley - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-06-17 09:33 PM


Julian~
This is just exquisite ! !

'I am laughing as children do for no apparent reason
but for the love of time spent today, for I cannot
fathom the depth of yesterday
or length of tomorrow.'


*Applause*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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2 posted 2001-06-17 09:35 PM


Ahh, Julian, as an instructor and diver for twenty eight years, there is no greater peace...thank you for letting me dive those waters...smiles
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-06-17 09:36 PM


This is perfection, Julian!  Loved it much.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mabel A. Dilley
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4 posted 2001-06-17 09:40 PM


Marge, Logan and Lone Wolf: thank you very kindly for taking a dive into the past only to find this day. I'm hedging my bets toward yet another birthday. Tick, Tick...uh oh.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Suetang
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5 posted 2001-06-17 10:26 PM


Julian
I thought this was so beautifully written and your words were very powerful........Sue

Suetang

Mabel A. Dilley
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6 posted 2001-06-17 10:56 PM


Sue: thank you so much. I hoped it to express the beauty of today.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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7 posted 2001-06-17 10:58 PM


Yanno - knowing you each day makes it part of the best day of MY life, pen on dear friend, for you have much to say worth saying.  (hugs), oh...and I loved this by the way  

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Mabel A. Dilley
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8 posted 2001-06-17 11:13 PM


Mysteria: thank you so much for schlepping through the rough and the rhyme.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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